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    'These Old Roads', Lyrics awaiting melody

    Hi All. I have been away from these forums for a while, but in the interim I started writing a bit again. This one's about a breakup. Any and all comments are welcome. THESE OLD ROADS V.1: Friendly houses watch me Each time I walk on...
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    An Anti-Temperance Song of sorts

    Hi All, Remember the old, foot-stomping, everybody-sing-along type "repent sinner" songs you used to be able to hear at church gatherings and from Salvation Army groups? Well....this is a bit of that, just in the opposite direction...think a major key, upbeat chorus, old-fashioned chord...
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    New Lyrics; any input appreciated

    Queen of the Castle Queen of the castle With one broken king, Created from nothing, A casual fling You wanted it all You wanted to hide You built up the ramparts 'til everything died Queen of the castle Doors are shut tight The things you're hiding Must never see light A love for the...
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    Lyrics: Waiting for Life to Begin

    Hi all, This is only the second time I have ever attempted lyrics, so any and all advice is appreciated. I feel this should be on guitar, maybe with some quiet acc in the background. Haven't decided if chorus should move up, and an instrumental break of some kind is needed. The story of a lost...
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