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This is excellent. Sounds very modern. The vox get a little bit buried during the busy part of the song. The song as a composition has a vintage effect of like nostalgia. Not something I'd expect a 13yo to dream up. I'd expect someone like a young Judy Garland to sing this. Very well done.

This is so well done. Everything sounds great. The drums are outstanding. Sweet guitar riff.

Sounds excellent. Nice use of the mysterious chord changes. It has a bit of a Spanish dancer feel. Maybe throw in a pinch of this finger clacker things. Sweet ending too.

I’m going to post a revision soon I hope. Thanks RDSmith.

Thanks dobro. I got my speaker going. I took a lot of the keyboard notes out. I think that makes some space for the vocal.

Thanks DM60. I’ve only heard this one through headphones and I’m not really happy with the levels. Getting burned out on it actually.

I've gotten to a point where I need to contemplate the next move. I migrated to a new PC. I've not gotten it quite worked in yet. I need a new interface and a monitor switching gizmo. Thanks dobro - appreciate the encouragement.

Hi TripleM. Thanks for pointing to the keyboard part. Are you referring to the piano or the organ? Yes cymbals are some kind of a synth creation, or a 808 whatever that is. Thanks for the feedback.

Hi RD Smith. Vocals up a bit. Hmm are you listening to a mono mix? I ask because I exported this track to my Tascam DP-24SD. It was in mono on my first listen and yes the vocal was hard to hear, but better after adjusting the panning to stereo. Vocals hard to hear - well yes if they need to...

Not the title I would prefer but beggars have to accept etc. Another work in progress. This one may take years to complete. And so to not waste years on a bad mix, I offer this preview to all of you for mix comments. First - is the vocal too loud? Vocal - are they understandable? Second - does...

Came here to say this.

Thanks 9 strings. :)

Now we're talking. Short and sweet.

So here it is with the chords in place

now it lands. upon loving hands. the warm is what i want. hold me. i know you told me. i will be here tomorrow. no one can say that. goodnight father.

Count me in. I type words, scratch words with a pencil or say words to my sweet wife. For what is pop music without words?

I don't know. It looks ok when I hit edit. I mean the formatting.

Something is not aligned. Please yall see this See how the spaces or the tabs are missing? With what kind of minimum codec am I dealing?

This is a back and forth vocal chat between two people. The parts that are to be sung are marked with ie (he). The melody is simple. intro chords C-F C G F Gsus G C C F C (he) why don't you love me anymore C F C (she) because you kissed a fucking...

Oops - so is the new music on keel or am I foundering again?