Hey, first of all that first comment made was a bit harsh but you have to realize that you are posting on a home recording forum so there is an expectation of the desire to improve your recordings themselves. however, in this instance to work on your voice I don't believe a stellar recording is...
Started off really good, but then you fell off pitch and your runs ran you totally off pitch. You have a great tone which is good because it is one of the hardest things in singing to develop but you really need to work on your pitch control
I described how to go about it above! There is nothing wrong with it from a technical stand point. It is just lackluster especially in a song like this.
For example, imagine if I were singing this song in a heady mix what would that do to the passion and intensity of the choruses. It would be...
1. I agree with others--don't put 'first timer' in the title in the future if you want to get maximum responses.
2. Agreed. This is a huge song which is a cover itself, what!?!? yeah, Dolly Parton is the original artist. Whitney changed the song in a major way and did such an amazing job it has...
Yeah I found the vocal to be a bit too thin so a bit of a boost somewhere in the lower end will fatten them up a bit which should help them sound less shrill
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah I may have gone a bit overboard with the high end EQ. I will touch that up tonight and post it up again. I appreciate the compliment. It took me 8 years of vocal training to get to this point though.