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    New track - Absynth

    The whips had me hooked from the beginning. Love the sounds and the groove. Don't really have any critiques, but I liked it and listened the whole way through.
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    The Surface - alternative

    Really cool song, I think the mix sounds awesome. Some of the cymbals seem to stand out a bit but I love how the rest of the drums fit in. It does seem like you struggled a bit on the vocals in some spots, but overall I think they sound great. I'm hearing "scratching" as the wrong note.. I'm...
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    Havana

    I do think the clank sound is a bit loud, but love this overall. The instruments sound very cool and everything fits together really well. I didn't even really notice any screw-ups in timing like you had said. It paints a picture / tells a story, like it would be part of a soundtrack. I listen...
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    I'm still having fun :)

    I like this quite a bit. To me it currently sounds like a demo or an 'acoustic' version of a song that I can hear being much bigger. Can't offer too much critique on that though when it was done on an ipad! I think your vocal is very good. You don't sound like you're trying too hard or not...
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    Skyline - Looking for feedback

    It sounds like timing is way off with the acoustic guitars, but it might just be the chord part + riff part don't work together well, and the hi-hat can easily be confused for the pick hitting the strings type sound. I actually thought I had another song playing on a different window when I...
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    Last One In The Room - alternative mix

    Sounds good to me. If I heard it anywhere else I would have thought it was a Jimmy Eat World song. No idea what their newer stuff sounds like, if they're even still around. But a lot of those bands' sounds became a lot more modern as time went on. Yours is cool because it sounds like an old...
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    This City - alternative pop stuff - mix feedback?

    This sounds great. Sounds like something I would have loved in high school. I wasn't a fan of how you cut out the word 'break' before the break, it's like you were just about at the top of the song but then the power disappears right before it. It's not bad but was a bit jarring to me. It...
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    Fly at Night - Indie Rock/mix critique

    Very cool song, I love the effect you have going on during the verse. Is that just a simple guitar riff with a delay? One thing I remember these types of bands doing was to switch it up in between verses. For example it would be on the left during the first verse, then on the right during the...
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    I have been working on my own art.... i'd like honest opinions.....

    I think Will Smith covered the clean rap diss track in Freakin' It. Your song still has swears in it though, so I'm not sure exactly what you're going for. That being said, I'm not a rap fan in general, but there are a very few songs that I like. Obviously you hear a song when you type it on...
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    Hello all, first song since I gave up on music

    I like this mucho! Love the hit at the very end, though I'm not sure if the sound fx are necessary, I don't think I dislike them either. I think the guitar is EQ'd well if this were a total live track, but in this context I think it would fit like others said to be a little more sparkly and a...
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    If you're interested...here's today's pop music

    I find it hard to hate pop music overall, as there are so many genres, and so many songs. I will admit though, I don't stay current on the top pop songs, but occasionally do hear some that I like. Generally do not like the tweeny pop. But even if it is written by a committee, would that...
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    New Metalcore song

    This is badass. Would be a lot of fun in a Perfect Dark / sci-fi type game.
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    90's Pop Punk Mix... need some suggestions for improvement!

    The new mix is way better than the others, but it does seem to still lack balls. What are you using for compression? It's almost like you're missing all the low mids.
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    Feedback requested, original song.

    Very well done song, I was going to say the vocals should come up, but it seems for the 'otherworldlyness' of the song they may work where they are. Really nice guitar work, and i like the mix as well. It sounds like there are a ton of layers, but you did a great job. I don't think the synth...
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    No Time to Say Goodbye

    I like the song as well as the mix, no critiques from me... sounds great!
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