Lovely. Everything's right - the song, the performances, the mix - everything's great (esp. the mix) , but I gotta say that all of that good stuff is just a setting for her voice. She's what I was listening to.
I like it. I'm not sure yet about the down section 1.30 - 1.45. I'd be tempted to mute something else in that section. I'd also be tempted to add something completely off the wall. I'd also be tempted to mess big time with the sound of one or more of the elements in what you already have in that...
You make this stuff sound easy. I think it is, for you. Super-quick rattling drum fill just before 2.00 - might be more effective to go the opposite way and be super-simple. Just one hit, or maybe two. Whatcha think?
Kev, your description of Stu is bang on. 👍
The song: I'd be trying to record a new drum track - there's no groove with the present parts. Maybe new bass part, too. This one needs a light touch which is also tight as a tight thing.