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    Tasty bass line. 👍
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    New Original

    Thanks for listening and for the input. The solo in the middle was almost an afterthought. Originally it was just the rhythm stuff there. But it was really empty, so we added the guitar fill.
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    New Original

    I haven't posted here in awhile. This our latest one, called Slow It Down. Thoughts and comments appreciated. Recorded in a basement using Cakewalk by Bandlab.
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    Flight of An Angel

    Usually not a fan of instrumentals, but this is nice. Pleasant to listen to. As others have said, work on the balance between all the guitars. Good job.
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    Chasing Memories or Chasing Dreams

    Nice song. Easy to listen to. Vocals could maybe come up a smidge in the mix. The vocals around 1:38 sound auto-tuned or something. Maybe that's what you were going for? Nicely done. I like the melodic bass line.
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    Mykonos (Fleet Foxes cover) - Folk Rock

    This is not an original; it's a cover of a Fleet Foxes song. Lol. Guess I shoulda read the title. 🤪
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    Mykonos (Fleet Foxes cover) - Folk Rock

    This is quite nice. Well recorded. Well performed. I also noticed the guitar strumming in the beginning being not in time, but it's pretty much a nit. Is it an original? You mentioned there being no bass and therefore nothing to interfere with the guitar. But I usually find that the vocals...
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    Sittin on the dock of the bay cover

    Nice, easy listen. I like your voice. Is this all midi? Everything instrumentally sounds a bit fake. Overall nicely done.
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    Year Of The Locust - cover of Nancy Blake tune

    Tasty. Well done. Well played.
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    Fleetwood Mac - "Dreams" - WTF is this, magic?!

    That in itself is an issue.
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    New Original Song: For Your Consideration by Ujn X Reve

    Not really my cup of tea. I guess this is dance club music? Too much reverb and effects for my taste. Can't really add much, sorry.
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    Fleetwood Mac - "Dreams" - WTF is this, magic?!

    Pretty much have to agree with what's already been posted. Vocals are pitchy and out of your range. That said, your voice isn't unpleasant, so it's really a matter of mastering the pitch and maybe try something that's in a better range for you. You seem to think you can fix it with...
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    The Only Word That Mattered

    Thanks for listening and the honest critique. I’ll take a look at some ducking on the guitars and bass. Fwiw, the double drum hits in the very beginning of the song (before the vocal) are from a totally different kit than the rest of the song. But I’ll look closer. I know I put some effects...
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    The Only Word That Mattered

    Thanks for listening, SR. I get what you’re hearing on the drums. It was deliberate, but maybe I’ll rethink it. Appreciate the feedback.
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    The Only Word That Mattered

    A new one, gentlemen (and ladies if there are any?). Appreciate any and all feedback on it. 'Bout a long ago breakup, titled The Only Word That Mattered...
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