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DjIce

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This song is very explicit so if you are offended by explicit lyrics, please do not read on, YOU have been warned, for the others that are interested, keep reading. :D

DjIce - Dirty

Girl you know I like it when you suck it real hard
stick that dick in your mouth deep throat it far
Suck it up suck it down slurp around with you tongue
Keep on goin' don't stop, don't stop til I cum

You know i love it when you do the job well
Your doin' it real good its makin my dick swell
bigger & bigger, harder & harder, in and out you know what its about
move it up move it down, move that tongue all around
tighten yer lips around that cock
c'mon baby lets make the bed rock
c'mon baby lets get down & dirty
I'm feelin freaky & just a little flirty
Slide it in nice & easy
Fuck you real hard it seems so breesy
I aint done no not yet
this feels good with your pussy so wet
moan baby moan baby it feels real good
imma fuck you like I really should

Girl you know I like it when you suck it real hard
stick that dick in your mouth & deep throat it far
Suck it up, Suck it down, Slurp around with your tongue
Keep on goin' don't stop, don't stop til I cum

I'm feelin' real good about what we do
don't stop not til your covered in goo
fuckin that pussy oh so hard
fuck you here fuck you there I'll even fuck you in my car
I know you like it when I do it really really good
I know you like what I got under my hood
no don't do not stop
c'mon baby fuck that cock
take it real hard, take it real deep
take it so long I can't feel my feet
scream real loud let me know that you like it
move your hips up & down, slide 'em just a little bit
I love it when you put them pussy lips around my dick

girl you know I like it when you suck it real hard
stick that dick in your mouth & deep throat it far
suck it up suck it down slurp around with your tongue
keep on goin' girl don't stop don't stop til I cum


Kinda dirty, Kinda good, but it's cool, give me your opinions of it below, Thanks in advance...Sorry to those who it offended.

DjIce


:EDIT: -- 11 Views & No Comments :D Must Suck Bad!!! :D
 
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joke?

dude i fucking hope that that song is a joke...why would you waste your time writing something so pointless and uncreative...i suppose perhaps you want attention or something...i dont find it offensive...Is that the purpose of the song?...if it is you need to fucking rethink your life...maybe pick up a book and read or something...
sorry i wasnt offended
 
Crowley said:
dude i fucking hope that that song is a joke...why would you waste your time writing something so pointless and uncreative...i suppose perhaps you want attention or something...i dont find it offensive...Is that the purpose of the song?...if it is you need to fucking rethink your life...maybe pick up a book and read or something...
sorry i wasnt offended
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:) Finally somone picked up on it!!...yes it was a joke that I had between my friend & I we were joking about the song David Banner - Play, so I decided well I'll re-make it just for the hell of it, it took me like 3 minutes to write, it was a joke, I'm glad sombody picked up on it, Thanks for the comment by the way :)

DjIce :D
 
Joke though (I hope...) it may be...

I should just like to point out, that there was once a band that sold a LOT of national copy, with one songs practically entire lyrics being:

"women: eat my pussy!!"
"men: : suck my cock!!"
"women: eat my pussy!!"
"men : suck my cock!!"

repeated for like 99% of the song, with piss poor instrumentation, to boot.

This made them a lot of money, lmao
I just mention this in passing, because it dismissed as too much of a joke, notice that THOSE joke lyrics are kinda lkyrical genius compared to the OTHER mega hit song, lmao.


For the love of the sacred christ, the more people pointed out how horrible and un-noteworthy the entire album really was, the more kids bought it. The more people tried to "do" something about such verbal porn, the more kids SNUCK and bought it.

sadly, put out in CD's nationally, nobody would take any notice, and maybe sell, like, 2 CD's total sales...until someone COMPLAINED about how explicit was, and how easy it was for kids to get a hold of stuff they werent old enough to buy...then sales would go thru the roof, as kids found ways to buy it, as a "status symbol" of how "raw" they were.

note that the quality of the song in questin for something like this, is completely irrelevant. Tell peopel they shouldnt have it, its horrible, they will snatch it up and seem to like just to prove you wrong...try to outlaw it, or regulate it, and it will just drive sales thru the roof. (sigh)

and everyday, we see and hear songs that are better than much of what passes for music on the radio, and nobody wants to put them out there.

AM I WRONG?!?! lmao...
 
:D :D I agree 100% that is so very true, If they don't want a person to do it, that makes the person do it more!...I love the facts of life, don't you?...Ah, & yes the whole song was just a joke, I took a few minutes of my time & Just freestyled it really quick onto Notepad, for the fact I can't freestyle aloud yet because I mess up too much :o but! I'm workin' on it, but yea' they aren't the greatest lyrics, due to ...3 minute writing?..& I didn't even really try, I was just playin' around as a friend of mine & I were laughing at how stupid songs are getting these days, with no meaning to them..for instance David Banner - Play...disgraces alot of artists today, because sure the beat is kinda cool, but why do people want to actually listen & sing aloud to the lyrics.."Finga fuck ya pussy like ya want some girl"...ok sure now if your into that, just get whips & chains & a couple set of handcuffs & I'll be ok with it...but damn..I don't know about ya'll but, to me...it's gettin'g very pathetic how if you make 1 good song, the rest of your songs will sell no matter how pathetic or stupid they are...*sigh*...just me though.. :)

Reply as you wish...Thanks for the comments.

DjIce
 
Kinda takes me back to Luke Skywalker and the 2 Live Crew... Mid-80's stuff... I pretty much thought it sucked, but played it anyway because it shocked folks in the small town I grew up in..

This could work even now if it's done right.... Find a copy of Gin and Juice by The Gourds... You can about put these lyrics word for word into the rythym of the verses and chorus...

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Rob
 
Crash © said:
Kinda takes me back to Luke Skywalker and the 2 Live Crew... Mid-80's stuff... I pretty much thought it sucked, but played it anyway because it shocked folks in the small town I grew up in..

This could work even now if it's done right.... Find a copy of Gin and Juice by The Gourds... You can about put these lyrics word for word into the rythym of the verses and chorus...

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Rob
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Hmm..Would seem reasonable to actually do the song, but I don't think I'm going to due to it was a joke & I wrote it to get a rise out of people, & Most likely the first poster, it got a rise out of..But..Thanks for the advice, if I get bored, I may try that. :)

:cool: DjIce :cool:
 
SEDstar said:
Joke though (I hope...) it may be...

I should just like to point out, that there was once a band that sold a LOT of national copy, with one songs practically entire lyrics being:

"women: eat my pussy!!"
"men: : suck my cock!!"
"women: eat my pussy!!"
"men : suck my cock!!"

repeated for like 99% of the song, with piss poor instrumentation, to boot.

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Luke Skywalker feat. The 2 live crew cornered the market on this style already...
 
Ice... Ya know.. The thing that worries me most... In 4 or 5 more years, my now 11yo daughter, is gonna be your age and I'm gonna have to deal with punk guys like you with a boot up the ass... LOL

Hell, I was just like you at that age though.. Guess ya tend to forget what a horney little SOB you were as ya get older..

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Rob
Ahh.. Enlightenment..
 
Crash © said:
Ice... Ya know.. The thing that worries me most... In 4 or 5 more years, my now 11yo daughter, is gonna be your age and I'm gonna have to deal with punk guys like you with a boot up the ass... LOL

Hell, I was just like you at that age though.. Guess ya tend to forget what a horney little SOB you were as ya get older..

--
Rob
Ahh.. Enlightenment..
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LOL, Yeh', But it wasn't the fact of writing that song for that purpose, a friend of mine & I were simply poking fun at most of the songs that sell so big that are so pointless such as that one, I'm not the type you think I am, If yer thinkin' I"m the punk type that goes around tryin' to screw everything that has 2 legs & at least 1 breast your wrong, I'm saving sex til' marriage, not that you care or even want to know, but I do know what you mean, Put it this way, keep a close close relationship with her so she can tell you everything so her concience gets to her , that way if something happens between her & a guy, she'll tell you, Trust me it works, my conceince got to me when me & my girlfriend went a little too far, & well I confronted my parents about it, (no it wasn't sex) but they understood teenage hormones, but they have restricted sleeping in the same room, etc. Due to this fact, which is helpful, but just keep an eye on her, don't want no youngin's gettin' the preg belly..Like an 11 year old here where I live that gave birth to a child that died because she wasn't developed enough to give birth yet..sad..sad..sad..., But anyways, enough of this bibble babble, just keep an eye on her, I do know what you mean though. :) Thanks for the comments

:cool: :D DjIce :D:cool:
 
The kid has a concience that gets her every time... She's actually grounded right now... Got a nice little note for yelling in class and saying next time got the after school detention thing.. Was supposed to be signed and brought back the next day.. We've been busy trying to get things wrapped up for Christmas and have been out and busy just about every night so I don't blame her for forgetting about getting it signed. And she's always had to be the loudest in group and getting in trouble for talking at school is something we've been dealing with since day 1.. It's just her, she's going to make herself heard and I kinda like that about her. She'll learn the when not to's in time...

Anyroads... At some point just like every other kid it crossed her mind to try and forge the signiture.. About the time she did it, it hit her... Before she even handed the teacher the note, she told her she forgot to get it signed and did it herself. That momentary lapse in reason is what got her grounded.. It's kind of hollow though, just means no going out to play with her friends after her homework's done... Been to cold and dark to go out for the past few weeks anyway...

And BTW... When you've got a little girl between the ages of 12 and 20, ALL guys are a bunch of punks and a threat.. As such, I am a 220lb biker and am a threat.. They have their job and I have mine... LOL...
 
Crash © said:
The kid has a concience that gets her every time... She's actually grounded right now... Got a nice little note for yelling in class and saying next time got the after school detention thing.. Was supposed to be signed and brought back the next day.. We've been busy trying to get things wrapped up for Christmas and have been out and busy just about every night so I don't blame her for forgetting about getting it signed. And she's always had to be the loudest in group and getting in trouble for talking at school is something we've been dealing with since day 1.. It's just her, she's going to make herself heard and I kinda like that about her. She'll learn the when not to's in time...

Anyroads... At some point just like every other kid it crossed her mind to try and forge the signiture.. About the time she did it, it hit her... Before she even handed the teacher the note, she told her she forgot to get it signed and did it herself. That momentary lapse in reason is what got her grounded.. It's kind of hollow though, just means no going out to play with her friends after her homework's done... Been to cold and dark to go out for the past few weeks anyway...

And BTW... When you've got a little girl between the ages of 12 and 20, ALL guys are a bunch of punks and a threat.. As such, I am a 220lb biker and am a threat.. They have their job and I have mine... LOL...
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LOL, Indeed, you have a job, & that is to protect your daughter to all rights, I understand 100%, But most girls are scared of me :P...Only because I'm a 265lb Long Haired Hippy that Listens to rap! what a combo..haha, I'm not even 6 foot yet, but I'm gettin' there ay'.. haha..well yeh' I udnerstand that your daughters got a conceince 'bout that, but when it comes to guys, be careful they can be tricky & this is coming from experience...the days have changed as have the years, my generation thinks way differently than your generation that's for sure, just watch out for her & be careful that's all the advice I can give, & yes, Scare every punk that comes near her, we deserve it LOL.

:cool: DjIce :cool:
 
265... Jesus H Christ on a Crutch.. That'd scare me and my Mamma use to tell em she wouldn't want to run ito me in a dark alley...
 
Crash © said:
265... Jesus H Christ on a Crutch.. That'd scare me and my Mamma use to tell em she wouldn't want to run ito me in a dark alley...
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haha!...Nawgh, I'm a nice guy, Just a bit on the big side that's all :D, I won't hurtcha I promise ;)

:cool: DjIce :cool:
 
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