Can I get some constructive criticism on my singing?

Jonny Felix

New member
Hey, I'm new to these forums, but I've been working and trying to study music better.
I couldn't find a site to get some feedback, so hopefully you guys could help me improve!

Here's a quick song I made: h ttp://soundcloud.com/guitarjunkie-1/love-thing-gone-awry

On this song I composed the whole music piece including the synth and synth horns.
I had a melody so I wanted to sing along with it, but I hate it because I can never get my voice how I want it.
My voice gets shaky and weak trying to hit higher notes, and sometimes its straining.
My father tells me I should just produce and let someone else sing my lyrics and music,
but I want to sing my songs!! It means that much to me.

So if you can, rate me on:
My Voice
Harmony
Music Arrangement
Anything Else

I want to know how I can improve those things.

I want to get formal lessons for Piano and Vocal but I don't have any money at the moment :(
 
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