For sure.
Thank ufor listening and giving a little feedback on mine!
I came back to listen to it again.
It's a catchy song.
It sounds ok - voice and all.
If music industry put their like big money tools on it I think it would push it over the edge and I could imagine it being on radio level... I don't mean like corny radio stuff what I mean is your abilities with composition, singing etc I hear on this.
I like how the guitar does... And placement of syllables with beat. It carries it along to the chorus, and the chorus is like 1 that I find myself humming afterwards.
...doing it now as I type hah
Would just say - if you're pursuing this as a full time thing putting music out there - I'd say make sure whatever words/ ideas you put out there are what you'd be ok with if they influenced people, even after you're gone. Lead people in the right way you know... Realize it's your life and your music so it's your art, just my advice for what it's worth.
I think u have potential.
Also - Not saying you are or not on this song - haven't analyzed the lyrics yet... Ive just listened to it multiple times just bc it's catchy and sounds good man!
Going to the rest of your songs on SoundCloud now.
Like I said - think you've got potential man.
Peace
Hi, KrystianL and Mhcapa1, and thank you for taking the time to listen and provide feedback. I’m glad you both liked it, it felt like a good song when I finished it, but I was worried my vocals couldn’t carry it. It’s reassuring to know that people actually enjoy my singing because I don’t wanna stop; I really enjoy it and wish I’d started a long time ago. Anyways thanks for the honest opinions and for your time.