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BooRadley

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Hi all
I just put together a myspace page for the first time and wouldnt mind some feed back on a rough demo i put on there... Its a kinda countryish tune with no melody or vocal... just guitars so if you have any ideas on how i can improve or add to it please dont hesitate to reply.

Even some feedback on how i can make the page look better... it looks really boring at the moment... I have to figure how to decorate a myspace page. Any replies would be much appreciated.

http://www.myspace.com/booradley1979

Cheery Bye
 
BooRadley - Excellent songwriting (musically/melody) this has tons of potential and just needs some vocals to finish it up. One item - your 1:31 lead/chords are a bit different - not as "sweet" musically as the rest of the piece. Not sure if it's the lead or chord change....

Some observations on the mix.....
The levels are not quite even - the guitar at 1:19 is super loud.....
The flanged effect is too much IMHO, I would suggest less effect level....
The slide playing is good level....

Like I said though this is super cool and I can see this becoming a great tune.....

Keep us posted.....

:D :) :D :)
 
Thanks for that... im pretty new to recording but I'll definately take on board what you've told me and let you know how i go...
Cheers
 
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