Snowman999
Active member
You ever record a song and like it one minute and can't stand it the next? Maybe I'm getting too picky, or maybe not picky enough.
Any thoughts would be appreciated.
Partners by Frances Farmer My Hero | Free Listening on SoundCloud
You were unruly
Left me in charge of the moon
I didn't notice
Twinkling stars spoon
Talking trash
Makes us laugh
Time flies fast
Present's left in the past
Sun rose yelling Hey
Leave for the day
I chose to stay
Tanning in the rays
Eclipse my eyes
A lovely surprise
Jealous disguise
Losing rises from the lies
We're partners - partners for life
Rise and set
Dusk to dawn
Winter to spring
Summer to fall
We're partners - partners for life
Heaven made
Good and bad
Time well spent
Happy or sad
Partners
Can't let me down
Partners
Can't let me down
Any thoughts would be appreciated.
Partners by Frances Farmer My Hero | Free Listening on SoundCloud
You were unruly
Left me in charge of the moon
I didn't notice
Twinkling stars spoon
Talking trash
Makes us laugh
Time flies fast
Present's left in the past
Sun rose yelling Hey
Leave for the day
I chose to stay
Tanning in the rays
Eclipse my eyes
A lovely surprise
Jealous disguise
Losing rises from the lies
We're partners - partners for life
Rise and set
Dusk to dawn
Winter to spring
Summer to fall
We're partners - partners for life
Heaven made
Good and bad
Time well spent
Happy or sad
Partners
Can't let me down
Partners
Can't let me down