pewterbird99
New member
I just finished writing a new song called "Love Me" hear it at www.myspace.com/danielsmithrock and wanted you guys to critique the songwriting. I wrote it with a "movie soundtrack" kinda feel which to me means a big chorus. My technique for the structure in this song was to build up to the chorus quickly and hit you in the face with it. Then for the second verse I built it up with a lead in the "I need you" part just to give it more dynamics. For the break I wanted to keep the energy flowing until I dropped it off for the lead in again. Then I let it slam out for the last chorus. As far as lyrics I wanted to make it a more "raw" emotion type of song leaving out a lot of the metaphors. You can see the lyrics in the myspace player. I would appreciate any thoughts on the song.
Thanks
-Daniel
Thanks
-Daniel