Pedullist said:
Good decision to keep it far way from drums
Yeah, it probably was a good decision. Of course, I added drums before I read your post, lmao. THANKS!!!
I believe the bass resonates harder at some points, results in a 'vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeewwwwwwww' sound
That's it exACTly. I never even thought about it being the actual bass itself...figured it was some kind of sympathetic frequency thing that you have to have those billion dollar multiband compressors to control... What I've tried now is graphing out the low end against the original tune and seeing where the spikes are...then I used a smasher compressor (like 9:1 with no output/input gain) on JUST between 60 & 150Hz on the bass track. I expected it to shrink down to nothing, but it really didn't. I think it might have helped...or made it worse, one or the other.
Btw, I love the spacy guitar part.
See, that's one of those "love it or hate it" things, I think. I'm glad you liked it. The guitarist for Emmy Lou Harris does ALL this distorted, ambient stuff on her acoustic tunes that's just TOTALLY out of place, but I like it a lot...so I'm trying to rip off that sound...only not as well, lol. Thanks for taking the time, Ped. I keep saying I'm gonna' get a new bass, and I keep not getting a new bass, lol.
studioviols said:
My only real complaint is that at 4:51 the damn guitar is so loud we can't hear that incredibly beautiful and tear jerking fiddle solo ... damn ... well, I guess maybe next song ;-)
Please...oh PLEASE. You know, I tend to post stuff kinda' "half-assed" a lot so that I can get ideas (and tracks from musicians) before I'm totally sick of the recording, lol. PLEASE, OH PLEASE, PLAY ME SOME FIDDLE??? I suffered through years of my daughter's screaching viola practices, and now that she can actually make MUSIC with the damned thing, I can't get a track out of her, lol. Anyway, thanks a ton for listening...if I actually PLANNED some stuff out instead of just throwing tracks together whenever the kids are gone, I'd have actual music on my CD, lol.
Khompewtur said:
Mixwise the only thing i could offer was that at the 5:00 mark (the solo) i started to get some rumbling on the right side and maybe some of the high's on the high part introduced there could be shaved off.
Thanks for plowing through this, man. You even proved that you made it all the way to the end, which is a feat of endurance to be sure. Spot on with the guit comments, btw - I ditched that outro and played another one and faded it before that quake-like rumble part comes in, lol. Anyway, I appreciate the time and the ears a lot...be good.
drstawl - thanks a lot, man. Too kind, too kind.
TripleM said:
Not sure about that electric... Lots of of "stuff" on it and I'm not sure it fits with the rest of the music.
Yeah, that's putting it mildly, lmfao. Actually, with the exception of the acoustic tracks, everything about this is just "wrong," which I knew when I posted it...but in a way, that's why it's in there. Johnny Cash did all kinds of bizarre stuff...(probably the amphetamines, lol). But whether it was that bizarre vocal delay he used a lot, or covering a NIN tune, he did stuff that didn't fit, which I think is why I'm such a fan. Ramble, ramble...blah, blah. What I'm saying is, "THANKS FOR YOUR TIME, MMM"
skids said:
I did not care for the lead tone or EQ at the end. Very narrow.
"Narrow" is one of the nicest euphamisms I've ever seen for "TOTAL SHIT," LOL. Seriously, I totally appreciate the listen and the post - see my response to Trip for my "reasoning," lol...but I'm positive that I'll hate it in 2 days.
erichenryus said:
the vocals sound like they might be just a tad over de-essed? something sounds just a little off about the ess's.
You know, it's funny you mentioned that. I've become so freaking anal about sibilance that I can't even sing normally anymore. There's actually no de-essing or any compression at all on that lead vocal...nada. Bad reverb, that's it. But I (almost unconsciously) pull back on the hard consonants when I'm tracking now, and I noticed on here that the final product is worse than if I'd just sung it and De-essed, lol.
I sound like I'm missing teeth! So that's my lot in life, now...I'm the human Autotuner with built in De-Esser - lol -
the "second beer for desert" hooked me on the song.
GOT TIME FOR A QUICK STORY?? Okay, well I do, so here goes. I'm listening to an interview with Johnny Cash on NPR about a year ago, and he was talking about this song in particular. It was written by Kris Kristopherson, who had made the scary move from Texas to Nashville to be a songwriter...so of course, he's a Nashville janitor inside of 3 weeks. However, Kris was a janitor with the ability to fly helicopters...a little skill he picked up in the Air Force. His songs were weird (I call them genius), and he was ahead of his time, in my opinion, but he was Janitor, nonetheless...and he was depressed about it, and drinking a lot, and writing too. He wrote this song, and he KNEW it would be perfect for Cash.
So he steals a helicopter and (no shit) flies it onto the front lawn of Cash's home. Even a star of Johnny Cash's stature notices when choppers land on the front lawn, so he comes outside to see what the hell is going on, whereupon Kris informs Cash that he's an aspiring songwriter who has written the DEFINITIVE Johnny Cash song. Cash listened to it on the spot, loved it, recorded it, and (as they say) "A STAR IS BORN." (movie pun there for Kris).
Far as I know, the story is true. I need a chopper.
Toki987 said:
OK Harris, I Know I`m already runnin' behind on one thats coming to you soon, but want in on another one!
Ken
Kenny - YOU, sir, get all the time you need from me. Please see my response to the Viola Guy for my track philosophy. If you ever get bored enough, and if you want to, I'd LOVE keys...always. ALWAYS!! Thanks for the listen, man.
HevyD - Your post meant a lot to me. Didn't mean to slight it by omission earlier. I hoped somebody would "get" this, so thanks.
Drew - Will do. I'm sure it's great. Thanks for the spin.
Myx - your wife sounds like a genius, lol. Thanks, man.
I did a (shocker) "remix," with drums. They suck, and they took forever, and I'm pretty sure anything that was decent about the tune has been obliterated by subsequent EQ'ing by now, but the good news is that I save all my mixes, so that six months later, I can listen with some objectivity and usually end up with the safest one, lol.
www.nowhereradio.com/honestmango/singles
Not asking anybody to relisten, I just mention the remix so that the thread is less confusing in case somebody listens to the latest and wonders why the fuck nobody mentioned the fact that Reggae drums REALLY don't go with this song...