Something I've been working on v2.0

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rfpd

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What do you guys think? I can't do much for panning because my headset are broken and only works in mono (L or R).

LINK ->soundcloud.com/mosesquovadis/song-v2
 
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Howdy, rfpd. I just dropped in to see what condition your condition was in... and found your soundcloud link got me to your page,
but there's no song there. Said it may have been removed.

Then I clicked your name and got to your songs on another page - Menace; Sorrow; Gift; etc..

Which of those are you referring to here?
 
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spantini said:
Howdy, rfpd. I just dropped in to see what condition your condition was in... and found your soundcloud link got me to your page,'
but there's no song there. Said it may have been removed.

Then I clicked your name and got to your songs on another page - Menace; Sorrow; Gift; etc..

Which of those are you referring to here?
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Hey there, Menace!
 
I like your voice's tonal qualities - good for alt rock. Your vocal was tentative at first, then opened up more later - but.. you're not
hitting some of your (vocal) notes on pitch. What you're playing on guitar sounds ok but it's awful muddy. I'd begin by re-recording
it (guitar) with some mid-range EQ boost to see if it cleans up any - not too bright, though.

I think it's a nice song, just needs a bit of cleaning up.
 
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