Hey man...Amelia 3. I didn't read this thread at all, b/c it taints me, lol...I FEEL DIRTY.
I think this thing sounds freaking great. More my kinda' tune, too, lol.
Two things:
1. The kick is just a hair too loud. When I pump the bass like it is in my car, it sounds a little on the dangerous side...not bad; it's close, and it sounds so cool I almost hate to mention it, but I think it could use a little taming.
2. Sibilance on the vocal - it's a bit harsh. Maybe the vocal itself could come up some...not a ton, though. Actually, like 1 db would do me just fine.
You've got a good handle on what you're going for, and I actually like this a ton. Nice job.