Sounds pretty good to me. Maybe my ears are tricking me, but I think the drummer is a bit off around 0:23 - 0:24. Also I would have made bass guitar a bit hotter.
Sounds like you've got a good sound and a good balance to me! I also hear a hiccup at the fill around :23. I think the bass is fine, except I would have liked a bit more honk in it.
with 2 voices tracked on it, it will be more clear
I also noticed the bass guitarbut the problem is when I turn up the bass or certain fq of the bass the guitar loses it's in your face for a small portion.
This was a kinda compromise