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    Race To The Bottom - Retracked Grunge Song

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    Hi all,

    Retracked and improved one of my earlier song ideas. Feedback most welcome:



    LYRICS:

    Youíre cold, but youíre sweating
    Your mind, ainít forgetting
    Your new primal need
    For poison feed

    Once more, you resolve
    To fix a problem, you canít solve
    Shuttiní out those that can
    Soon feediní time again

    Temporary hiding place
    From the truth, that you canít face

    Youíre in a race
    A race to the bottom
    Race
    A race to the bottom

    Regret, your decision
    Dead set, indecision
    Each crash sucks you in
    To poison sin

    Pitstop for you to feed
    Obsessive need for speed
    Itís a race, of attrition
    And you got, pole position
    Temporary hiding place
    From the truth, that you canít face

    Youíre in a race
    A race to the bottom
    Race
    A race to the bottom

    SOLO

    Youíre in a race
    A race to the bottom
    Race
    A race to the bottom
    Yeah
    Youíre in a race
    (to the bottom)
    Yeah
    Youíre in a race
    (to the bottom)

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    Hey man. Not my style but sounds like everything is in it's place as you do want that Wall of Sound for this...But that is not why I'm glad I stopped by

    SO I WENT TO CRIT THE MIX & FOUND SOME LYRICS i NEEDED TO HEAR TODAY...From freakin' GRUNGE of all places....Not my style but glad I listened. 2 lyrics stuck out for me today on this tune.

    Once more, you resolve
    To fix a problem, you canít solve (was literally ready to text someone about something that happened 5 months ago to ONCE MORE RESOLVE TO FIX A PROBLEM I CAN'T SOLVE---so for one more day I will let it go)

    Regret, your decision (IT'S MY FUCKING CHOICE & I AIN'T GOING THERE TODAY)

    Good lyrics in there in all this...thx

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    Pretty damn good. No problems here on headphones. I like your guitar tones. Good stuff

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    I like it! High energy tune with really good guitar tones. i think the mix is where it needs to be as well
    good job on this!

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    Great track man. Mix sounds final to me. I might MAYBE raise the vocals slightly to give it a more pop vibe - but honestly they're fine and the dominant guitars sound great. Great performances and composition. How was this recorded? A real band? Guitar VST's or real mic'd amps? Real drums?

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