Oh yeah, the mix....
Um, it's bad. It's disheveled and over-processed. I could almost live with it until the rhythm guitars come in and scratch the eyes out of everything else. Can you hear how those rhythm tracks come in and stomp everything out? Not good. No amount of EQ carving in the world can fix blatant level issues. Get your mix balanced without all the tricks and processing, then gently add stuff for flavor.