New Track/My first upload... Let me know what you think (Hip-Hop)

[fetuslasvegas]

Here it is. I'm looking to hear it all, the positive and negative. Thanks!!!
(please note, this is not mixed down. just a rough mix as part of a demo, but if you have mixing advice, I am more than happy to hear it)



https://soundcloud.com/gt4-productions/track-10

 

[fetuslasvegas]

anyone have any input?