Any comments would be appreciated.
Parts are a bit sloppy but overall it came out ok. I'm not really a vocalist, but no one will sing for me. Don't be frightened by the screaming in the beginning, the song is mostly singing.
I'm not sure where the middle section came from. Probably from being in a reggae band for several years.
I took the advice from everyone on the forum and get an sm57 for the heavy guitars. All the other guitars are J-Station. Drums are FLStudio. I also took some advice about producing a screamer from other section, though they sound a little muddy. But I'm also not good at it, which doesn't help. Vox recorded with an Oktava MK 219. All recorded on Mbox and Pro Tools.