New song

[dr1keyz]

I produced this track on the Motif and I just need any imput, if possible..is it good, bad, or does it completly suck ass. I am just posting the instrument. The actual version with words is on my other computer...So check it out..and tell me what you think.

Its the only song on the page and it is called "why" (instrumental)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/trisectentertainmentmusicproductionmusic.htm

Take care

 

[Calwood]

I'd have to say,..post the one with vocals. This one is really boring man. Sounds really good though.
I like the tune,..but not 4 minutes of it. It's the same thing over and over and over and over,..yikes!!!
I'm not saying that doesnt work. I'll reserve any further judgement till i hear the vocal version. I'll be lookin' for it 'cause I think this has potential to be a real good tune if the right vocalist can keep it interesting.

Take 'er easy,...
Calwood

 

[bigwillz24]

I love the piano loop. where are the drums? they sound buried. Yea a change up would be nice too.