new short song

I assume you mean..

Can't wait for the day

Short and sweet.
I would assume this is just a sample.
The writing is good.
At first I didn't like the double vocals and then it sort of grew on me.
I'd like to hear the whole song sometime.
 
don't like the double vocals too much, secondly, the vocals sound distorted, like perhaps some clipping is occuring.

nice melody, though.
 
Nice little guitar part. I liked the bass part too.

Not sure doubling the vox is the right thing for this. But if they're doubled, I'd keep both lead tracks down the center and record separate harmony parts. A couple of minor syncing things.

I noticed some slight hesitations on the guitars here and there.

Little pop at :07 - actually I think it's a mouth getting ready to sing. Some slight crackling at :51. Sounds like I can hear someone rustling around at :55.

Ok I'm being picky.... :)
 
Hey Jason,

I like the lyrics and the melody....a lot....the simpleness of the tune is just right.

Right now I'm speaking as if this is a finished product.

The Double Vox is not working with me. I listened a few times and it just did not work. This is a good song. I'm thinking someting along the lines of acoustic and vocals only.

If you are going to use the bass it definitely needs to blended, don't ask me how, better.

I think your harmony vocals are great if you use them sparingly. They seem to have more impact in small amounts.

I really like this song

Can't wait to here the final version

DutsyJack
 
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