While listening I get this black and white picture in my head.. it's of a dummy jumping a bicycle out of a second story window and then slippin off the seat and smashing his nuts when he hits the ground. At the very end of your tune you need to dub in someone going "Aarrrgghhhh!" and it'll be perfect!
Then there's another image... of Adam Curry wearing a leather jacket and trying to be "Metal". My god! Who is Adam Curry?!!