Hi! I’m new, so I can’t help much with the technical aspect but I can comment on the piece as a whole...
First..anyone who creates, prepares, presents something deserves kudos because it’s not easy! Good job!
The tune is catchy, the melody is sweet and sung well. The only thing I would say is that my ears got tired of the strumming pattern that runs through the entire song from beginning to end - it’s kind of the same thing over and over again and seems to overpower the vocals to some degree maybe?