Irwin abrigo
Member
Hi guys, this song is a collaboration I did with two of my friends and I am asking for some feedback.
Lonely Fool by Jay Williams Productions | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Lonely Fool
©2019 Irwin Byron Abrigo
(First verse)
If anybody see my baby
Tell her that I'm feeling lonely
Cause not anyone
Can do the things she does
She keeps me lively
In the day time
Make's me groan in the night
But now that she's gone I really
(Pre chorus)
The room is still a room
A chair is still a chair
The bed still lies there
But if she's not here
(Chorus)
I’ll be at home like a lonely fool
Pretending to be cool
If she's not here to open the door
When I got home
(Second verse)
If anybody see my lady
Tell her that I'm going crazy
She said she's leaving
Miss understanding
I said baby don't you worry
I will be happy
But that was a lie
Cause now I really
(Pre chorus)
The room is still a room
A chair is still a chair
The bed still lies there
But if she's not here
(Chorus)
I’ll be at home like a lonely fool
Pretending to be cool
If she's not here to open the door
When I got home
(Bridge)
I don’t want to be a lonely fool
Sitting alone in these lonely rooms
Since she’s been gone there been pain in my brain
Asking myself over and over again
Am I a fool (no) did all I had to do (Yes)
Then why she’s not in my presents
Why in my arms she is absent
(Pre chorus)
The room is still a room
A chair is still a chair
The bed still lies there
But if she's not here
(Chorus)
I’ll be at home like a lonely fool
Pretending to be cool
If she's not here to open the door
When I got home
Lonely Fool by Jay Williams Productions | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Lonely Fool
©2019 Irwin Byron Abrigo
(First verse)
If anybody see my baby
Tell her that I'm feeling lonely
Cause not anyone
Can do the things she does
She keeps me lively
In the day time
Make's me groan in the night
But now that she's gone I really
(Pre chorus)
The room is still a room
A chair is still a chair
The bed still lies there
But if she's not here
(Chorus)
I’ll be at home like a lonely fool
Pretending to be cool
If she's not here to open the door
When I got home
(Second verse)
If anybody see my lady
Tell her that I'm going crazy
She said she's leaving
Miss understanding
I said baby don't you worry
I will be happy
But that was a lie
Cause now I really
(Pre chorus)
The room is still a room
A chair is still a chair
The bed still lies there
But if she's not here
(Chorus)
I’ll be at home like a lonely fool
Pretending to be cool
If she's not here to open the door
When I got home
(Bridge)
I don’t want to be a lonely fool
Sitting alone in these lonely rooms
Since she’s been gone there been pain in my brain
Asking myself over and over again
Am I a fool (no) did all I had to do (Yes)
Then why she’s not in my presents
Why in my arms she is absent
(Pre chorus)
The room is still a room
A chair is still a chair
The bed still lies there
But if she's not here
(Chorus)
I’ll be at home like a lonely fool
Pretending to be cool
If she's not here to open the door
When I got home