I'll have to agree with the rest that this is not bluegrass......more of a campfire tune.....I do like the idea though. Singing is good, might want to deliver on the music though.....I can help you with the bluegrass stuff if you want.
Man...I just can't shake that campfire label...lol (is that even a genre?)...oh well. It probably could be worse. I really moved on from the whole bluegrass idea right at the beginning...the 1st version I was still trying for some kind of old-timey authenticity, and I failed. I'd say, with the additon of the electric guitars, this is now more of a mildly psychedelic lullaby.
If by help, (which I really greatly appreciate btw) you are referring to some sort of collaboration, I would be honored, however I am running strictly cassettes here, and I believe the prehistoric nature of my set up would make an online collaboration difficult if not impossible? I guess I don't really understand the technology involved.
Anyway, someone should do a bluegrass version of this sometime just for the hell of it.