really cool song. i second the notion that its nice to hear rock thats not some screaming growling unoriginal death metal shit.
heres my humble newbie take: the whole thing is played very well and the vocals sound great, but i think they could be a little louder. they seem to be fighting with the slightly too loud/boomy rhythm guitars, bass, and kick. the whole thing doesnt seem to have much dynamic range either. everything just chugs along at one constant barrage of volume. also as mentioned previously, it seems to get more 'squashed' as it goes along. overall i think its a cool song with cool arrangements, but just for my ears, it could still use some minor tweaks here and there. great job overall though. cool site too.