feedback needed

[dirtyp]

Hey can you review some of my songs? These are rough drafts need to tighting the flow up, Looking for feedback for the final version.

whats hood
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4415629&q=hi
writers block (unfinshed)
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4415690&q=hi

http://www.soundclick.com/dirtypocketsproductions

 

[rayc]

What's hood.
I like the beat & music.
The reverb, or some effect, is accentuating a fair bit of essing.
The rap is pretty fast & hard for an antipodean suburban like me to decipher 1st run through.
You need some variety in the backing - the 3 or 4 note run needs to either modulate or change totally.
Sounds very good otherwise.
You've been working hard & it shows.

 

[dirtyp]

Should I use a deesser or do I need to fix it at tracking?

 

[rayc]

It depends - if you can play back without the reverb you might find no prob. If you do deessing's the go. Even with the reverb the deesser might work. Try both before retracking. I'd assume that deessing on the non reverbed tarck would work best.