Hi there,
I don't know a whole lot about the genre. So I can't be a whole lot of use.
FWIW - it sounds to me like the real thing. Heaps of bottom end, but that is what you are going for, after all.
Samples weren't too repetitive for me. I liked your distorted drums @ 1:00.
The sweepy part that comes in after that, I would have liked to hear a little more ambience on to make it sit better with your backing.
Cool change @ 1:50 - I think I smell Rebirth or Reason here? Or do you have an 808
?
2:45ish the distortion on the edges of the drums sort of annoyed me.
3:09ish - I like the cacophony of the phone tones. Nice.
OK - I am nearly tired of the sampled "I'm gonna kick...." voice, but that is probably just me with this genre.
Again don't like the extreme of distortion on the drum at 4:00 - stopped being musical enough for me, but I like everything else that's going on at the time.
All in all, I'd say you've done a good job. Please let me know what tools you are using.
Thanks for posting!
Q.