Every Time
The piano sounds like a Yamaha Clavinova in texture, which is a bit synthetic, and there are a couple of chords that are not very suitable as alternatives to the original - they're not mistakes, as they repeat, but are a bit reminiscent of the chord simplifications that many transcriptions use. The arrangement in the original used lots of contrary motion - as the right hand goes up the left goes down, and some of the inversions leap upwards, when they don't need to.
The vocal, I really liked. The voice fits the song very well, and I'd experiment with some re-arrangment assuming the piano was recorded via MIDI. It doesn't sound realistic enough to be a genuine piano, so maybe an electric Rhodes type might work nicely with her voice.
Falling in Love - I really like this start to finish. Lots of polish you could fiddle with, but I'd be happy with it in this form. The guitar is quite bright and it masks her occasionally, but that's just personal preference, and I'd take the top off a little bit.