Forgive me, but I'm going to be brutally honest. It just doesn't work. Massive echo, massive distortion, basically unlistenable.
I'm assuming this is an "artistic" choice, since I listened to a couple of your other songs on Soundcloud and they were ok (Tourniquet, The City) although they need some polishing (EQ etc). I don't know what your goal is on this one, what effect you're trying to achieve, but I don't think its going the the right direction. I got through 20 seconds and when the vocals came on, I immediately skipped forward to see if there was anything worth even listening to later in the song. After 3 clicks, I hit the close window button.