comments and/or suggestions needed on track

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recotek

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A friend and I put together this song, the beat is licensed, but the lyrics are ours. We know that it is a crappy recording. It was done in a "horse Trailer", lightly modified (never again to be used), with a $20 mic and a crappy stock sound card. We are just looking for comments and or suggestions, mainly comments, the people who have heard it are friends or at least people we know and we want an honest, harsh, critical opinion. Good and bad is welcome. Thanks in advance.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=471761
 
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Welcome to the forum my man..Conceptualy you have some good ideas, it seems like I can believe what you're talking about, especialy the street casino, and I'll also give you props for lyrical content, but your delivery could use some work. It sounds like your reading your words. You should try to ride the beat more, a maybe relax your vocal tone a little more. You have a "I'm trying to sound tuff" tone. I would suggest just talking them in your everyday voice. As for the recording, believe me I've heard a lot worse. I would try doubling up my vocals, and putting some ad libs. Keep at player, you'll only get better
 
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