Well I commented on that tune 'Change' in the first link you posted.... And yes It still sounds like an eminem rip off today, same as yestersay....I suspect if i listen to it tomorrow I'll come to the same conclusion.....
Listen bro, if it looks like a duck...acts like a duck.... etc...
But keep in mind, Talent is certinaly NOT a prerequisite to making it the rap game....certianly not anymore... Just listen to some 50cent or even the less talented Kanye West... They are talentless retards as far as i'm concerned,l and no I'm not a RAP hater...so I listen objectively, and without prejudice...
I'll tell ya what, change the intro part, cause that is a DEAD ringer for eminem, and it taints the rest of the tune....IF I didn't hear that beginning part, then it probably would get better credit, but that first part sounds completly like a rip off if not straigt up stealing....
But even beyond that, the tune in general really isn't that catchy, no hook...sounds like the same old regurgitated shit that flows thru the airwaves on a daily basis....YA HAVE to be more original, something that no one has ever heard before.
Honestly, at this rate, is there still a need for the same old story: "I have more bling, and bigger rims, and my boys are bigger and badder than yours"
Man, this whole RAP thing really is going down the same stereotype as country music "My dog died, got 10 transmissions in the front yard, car is up on blocks"... LOL think about that man but at least in country music there are real musicians palying realy instruments, and they have enough talent to pull it all off live... which is a rarity within rap...
I'm not trying to "dis" you here, just trying to hopefully open up your eyes and offer some advice and help... hopefully it dosn't fall on deaf ears.