miroslav
Cosmic Cowboy
I really like the song, and overall the guitars and vocals are very good....but too key off on what Greg said.....it's rather flat from start to finish, and just looking at the waveform in Soundcloud, you could see that. I mean, you could lay brick with the edge of that waveform!
More diverse drums, more dynamics, break up the verses/chorus a bit better with arrangement so that the song isn't like a run-on sentence....and I think you'll have a great tune.
More diverse drums, more dynamics, break up the verses/chorus a bit better with arrangement so that the song isn't like a run-on sentence....and I think you'll have a great tune.