Another song I'm too close too...

Well you've cleaned that right up. All nicely balanced now. Vocals sound great and sit well. I like the tune and enjoyed the listen
 
Wow! What a long way that has come. Quite an amazing journey.

Intro = massive improvement.
Vocal needs more "air" still. I'm still struggling to concentrate on the voice completely, without the guitars being overbearing - particularly the quieter vocal at 1:28. I'd suggest lifting the quieter vocal in volume. Perhaps also add more upper-mid and higher freq EQ to the vocal throughout. Maybe cut some top-end EQ off the guitars so that they don't clash as much with the vocal. Also consider adding a bigger reverb to the vocal - I felt that I wanted to hear a sense of the vocal being in a bigger space - kinda floating over the top of the music.

Otherwise, I enjoyed the song through out. Nice job!
 
Sounds great, I think the first version would have been perfect after just pulling the vocal forward actually. Third sounds great too, really love the way the guitar and bass sound so full.
 
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