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Hi all, Interested to get some critique on my latest track "Beyond the Abyss" which is an ambient / rock affair still in production (think Coldplay I guess, someone mentioned PorcupineTree or something!?) I've done some quick & dirty vocals on it and wanted some feedback :) If you're...

Thx for the feedback, arrangement is constantly being changed at the moment whilst, when I write music... well, it tends to write itself, constantly evolving (which is where the 2nd part is coming into it) but it could probably come in 4 bars or so sooner (at the point where the first electric...

New Song - Beyond The Abyss - Soundtrack/Ambient (*updated work in progress*) This evenings work, so lots to do but drowning in the atmosphere at the moment :D *updated*

Hey, yes easily I think, these are really "rough" cuts/work in progress (i like to post as i write) and there's been little/no mastering done at all thus far :D

Thanks Kcearl, really good feedback and taken on board (and yes I hate my vocals at the moment! but I'm sure in time with lots of practice it will improve!) I guess it's like self image? you don't see yourself in the same way other people see you - I guess vocals are the same? I've actually...

Yeah I've gotta agree, this track has become more than just the start of a new song, it's now more an experiment with the new instruments and life without Reason. It's very "mechanical" in its rhythm, but that is quite deliberate :) almost staccato-esque. I know I can't "buy" that real...

I really think that this could be a really great track! Echoing what everyone above has said, it's lacking that depth/bass - at around 1:45 it feels like it should be coming into a bit of an epicy (not cheesy) chorus, but it just doesn't happen! you gotta make it happen! Really like the vocals...

Hey all, Well, having ended up going away of the New Year (unplanned) having the car break down and basically anything else that can go wrong, I managed to finally squeeze some time in to start re-writing my track, She Must Go. If you remember the original ->...

(posting from work, I know, Christmas Eve right... :() Just ordered Real Strat/Guitar as well, sounds incredible (obviously nothing like the real thing, but it'll take me a lot longer to learn to play real guitar than it will to get some great sounds though a VSTi and midi controller :)...

thanks KC I'll check them out, for now I think I at least worked out a way to make this sound more... real SLOW IT DOWN! realised how fast this track plays normally once I've dropped it 6bpm, see link below, hopefully this sounds better now! ignore the empty spaces mid track, vocals will...

Fair comment, and that's the part i'm trying to push away from sounding synthy/artificial to more "real" (quite hard without real instruments) the track as a whole is meant to be an upbeat/poppy/feel good kinda track so at least that is working :) I'll keep developing the sounds as I work, the...

Kcearl, I'm not and sorry if it came across that way, it's just not my cup of tea that's all, I said I do respect the quality of the track overall and if you'd like I will "review" it properly soon :) You especially have given me a lot of time/tips/feedback since I registered here, so I thank...

Actually, you know what? we're all here for the music right, and I may have been a bit quick to label the place clicky and should therefore expect such a response in return. I apologise for my comment, it was uncalled for and hope that we can start over. Dreamz

i am, i stated this is 2hrs work as opposed to however many to put into a full track - big difference - and im not saying its a bad track, but to `me` it doesn't have a great build up or an example of "how to make your track move" when compared to a lot of dance tracks - didn't say i didn't like...

yeah no offence, but it's "ok" the melody is pretty weak and cheesy, nice rich wide sound though i'll give it that, once i rework venus rising that will be awesome and the break/build on it blows this away :P but this track isn't going to be a dance/trance track so the mechanics will be...

thanks for the feedback so far, it's really good. reference the track "not going anywhere" yet, this is purely because I worked mostly on the first chorus/verse, then broke it down for the intro (adding other elements as I did it) so the whole build up itself is really just there to get to that...

lol well, i'll tell you what - it was more than the rest gave for the best part of a day so :D i also said that i would post feedback, and i will - but it's going to be limited whilst i've got my head down in my track, listen to too many other peoples songs whilst writing your own is...

actually i've made quite a few posts and given feedback as well, but i'm not getting into a forum argument :P

actually, all it does is illustrate a level of hostility with no good reason, but whatever floats your boat! :P If I listen to someones track, I tend to listen to other tracks they've done as well (as I'm sure many people do!) What a lovely "clicky" place this is!

awful lyrics from an awful group :P