Nice song, man! Can't wait to hear the rest.
Here's some highly personal thoughts:
The bass drum kind of masks out the bass guitar. I feel it has a little too much punch in comparison to the rest of the song. It sounds ok but it takes over the whole mix a bit.
The overheads sound like they're panned a lot. I would pan them a bit less to get a tighter drum sound. The reverb on the snare is cool, maybe a bit less on the cymbals in the beginning to go with the fairly dry vocals that comes in.
Anyways, it's already now a good mix and the song is really cool,
giggsy