What does this song need what should change?

[TruBLUE]

The sound is intentionally supposed to sound distant with a kind of echo. I made and mixed the instrumental my self as well as mixed in the vocals. This may be one of the best representations of my mixing skills. How did I Do?

 

[WhiteStrat]

I dunno...

The keys sound really toy-like. And there's not enough dynamic variety for my tastes. So you've this kickin' beat--but it would sound bigger, more impressive, if there were something to contrast it to. As it is, it gets a little old.

Keep pushin...

 

[ZoelVazra]

may be some sustain for keys...probly some reverb...hi-hat are little bit louder

 

[chandlerhimself]

IMO that 1 2 3 4 beat is too monotonous. It's good as an intro, but I don't think it can keep people's interest for a whole song. Try a variation of it after the drums come in and make the drums more prominent.

 

[snus]

The whole mix sounds a bit crowded in the middle. Try panning some stuff around.

 

[TruBLUE]

vocalsw should be centered rite?

 

[jimmys69]

I really shouldn't do this, but....