Hello...I wasn't sure which tune you were asking for feedback on, but I saw the word "Perfect" in your post, and saw that "Perfect" was a Valentine's Day tune, so I went with that.
Okay, positive points first. I like the singer's voice after the first verse, I liked the harmonies in that short section, and I thought it was a really good bass tone. I also liked the acoustic tone on the lead, and the harmonica was a nice touch.
Negatives - The tune's too long if it's not gonna' have any more changes, and this is especially apparent with a song in 3/4 time...it just starts hammering you to sleep after awhile. I didn't like the doubling/chorus (or whatever) on the vocal. It's mixed kinda' like a pop record from the 60's in terms of placement...the kit is WAAAAAY buried, with mostly the overheads carrying the rhythm section. This may be intentional, but it kinda' bugged me. There's a lot of noise in the track (hiss), and the pno is pretty muddy.
Again, I really liked the harmony section...you should do more of that. And while I know it's sometimes very hard to complete a thought in 3.5 minutes, you should really try. If it means hacking out a verse and cutting one of the leads...give it a shot, lol.
If this seems more negative than positive, it shouldn't...I just tend to use more words explaining the negatives, lol. See, watch.
Pros
1. Voice
2. Harmonies
3. Bass Tone
4. Acoutic Tone
5. Harmonica
Cons
1. Vocal Effect
2. Buried Drums
3. Song Length
4. Track Hiss
5. PNO mud