Until The Day...

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applesmasher

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My new song, any reccomendations?
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Until the day I poop
I'll spill my pee for you, for you
Until the day I poop
I'll spill my pee for you

As years go by
I race the clock with you
But if you pooped right now
You know that I'd poop to
I'd poop too

You remind me of the times
When I knew who I was (I was)
But still the second hand will catch us
Like it always does

We'll make the same mistakes
I’ll take the fall for you
I hope you need this now
Cause I know I still poo

Until the day I poop (Until the day I poop)
I'll spill my pee for you
Until the day I poop (Until the day I poop)
I'll spill my pee for you! My pee for you!
 
not sure what to say dude

a song with piss and shit in it-- definitely found your own angle

so what kind of song is it a punkish type song?
 
I don't know, you've got to think of live performance implications. Too many plosives with 'poop' and 'pee' being keywords. I'd use words like 'shit' and 'tinkle' or 'golden showers'.....more rhyming options.
 
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