Well.........it's apparent that English is not your native language..........which is ok.........but don't you think that if you're going to sing in a different language it should be understandable to those who speak that language? You have decent timing.............and no big pitch problems..........but your delivery and performance leave room for some work.
hmm. no, sadly instrumentals are not mine. It's karaoke off youtube. ;s pretty big thing I forgot to mention ~.~
Well I'm happy to know nobody thinks its terrible xD I thought my accent was fine though ;( at least on the understandable scale...