K. So I originally posted this song here. https://homerecording.com/bbs/general-discussions/mp3-mixing-clinic/some-input-appreciated-336307/
After realizing that a lack of bass was definitely leaving the track incomplete I borrowed my dads Gibson and did some recording. I'm not normally a bass player but I forgot how fun it is to be playing the low end of a song syncing with the drums to help finish the overall groove. I found myself moving around a little bit. Maybe a little embarassing beings I was in some superman PJs at the time. lol
Back to the song. I still feel like something is missing and/or like its not as polished as it should be?... Let me know what you guys notice, critics welcome.
Here is the song. http://www.purevolume.com/MrF76008/albums/Words+Left+Unsaid
Here are the lyrics.
You say cross your heart, as I cross my fingers
Because I like to believe girl that we could be winners
I trust you to know that I don't fall so easily
It took me by surprise when whispered, you were missing me
So I pull you near to tell you softly
That I'm not going anywhere, my dear
I never felt so alive as I do whenever you are by my side
Cause your smile reminds me that I am missing breathing
And in my chest I feel just how fast my heart is beating (tonight)
You chose a movie to watch that night, romantic comedies
Make me picture just how I wish my life could be
By now you're probably thinking, boy, he must be crazy (right?)
Well here's a crazy thought, why don't we get married
The church bells start ringing as you're walking toward me
While your parents smile so big as I start to sing loudly
So I say cross my heart, and put this ring on your finger
Cause I want to show the world you make me a winner
After realizing that a lack of bass was definitely leaving the track incomplete I borrowed my dads Gibson and did some recording. I'm not normally a bass player but I forgot how fun it is to be playing the low end of a song syncing with the drums to help finish the overall groove. I found myself moving around a little bit. Maybe a little embarassing beings I was in some superman PJs at the time. lol
Back to the song. I still feel like something is missing and/or like its not as polished as it should be?... Let me know what you guys notice, critics welcome.
Here is the song. http://www.purevolume.com/MrF76008/albums/Words+Left+Unsaid
Here are the lyrics.
You say cross your heart, as I cross my fingers
Because I like to believe girl that we could be winners
I trust you to know that I don't fall so easily
It took me by surprise when whispered, you were missing me
So I pull you near to tell you softly
That I'm not going anywhere, my dear
I never felt so alive as I do whenever you are by my side
Cause your smile reminds me that I am missing breathing
And in my chest I feel just how fast my heart is beating (tonight)
You chose a movie to watch that night, romantic comedies
Make me picture just how I wish my life could be
By now you're probably thinking, boy, he must be crazy (right?)
Well here's a crazy thought, why don't we get married
The church bells start ringing as you're walking toward me
While your parents smile so big as I start to sing loudly
So I say cross my heart, and put this ring on your finger
Cause I want to show the world you make me a winner