The Girls and I Need Some Feedback

[toymaker]

We are a trio who make electro-acoustic music.

Here is the first song of 6 on our upcoming ep. We're hoping for some feedback on the mix before we send it off for mastering.

snow into fire (unmastered1) by jesse thom on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free


Thanks!
-Jesse, Marley and Beth

p.s. as a side note, does anyone know how to embed soundcloud on a post?

 

[Sperry]

The mastering will pull it together. They'll get all the tracks? It's already pretty smooth.

 

[toymaker]

Thanks Sperry - can you please tell me how you embedded the soundcloud track so i can do it myself next time?

 

[Sperry]

Shure - sent'cha a PM on this

 

[Armistice]

All sounds pretty smooth to me.

If I was to do anything, I'd try to muck around with the piano sound a bit... sounds a little brittle to me... the playing's great, I'm just finding the tone a little cold/sharp in the context of the general "gentle" nature of the rest of the song / voices / sounds, if you follow me?

Nice tunage though. Like it!