Yo sorry i have been missing in action fellaz last two weeks i been in the lab on the slab for them dollars. but i'm making my rounds now and hittin every body with that said:
STOP to much going on in there at the same timeyou gotta cut it back or have sombody else spit to it ya vocals are clashing with the beat. i'm having to focus to hard to hear and understand you. Its those strings it sounds like you battling with them. the beat is tight by itself tho. i cant understand your chorus it might be going to fast or you might need a popper stopper or something for the silbilance. keep at it tho