YellowDwarf
Dismember
So I wrote this song about a war vet (I'm a Canadian, this guy is American, but it fit) and I'd like you guys to give it a listen and critique, please and thanks. You may have noticed that I'm not the greatest vocalist, but I do try.
Thanks,
Timbo
i was pushin my shopping cart one day - everybody in a suit but me
they all seemed so tall and i felt so small - that i worried somebody'd step on me
they worked up in the towers - you know the ones that touch the clouds
the higher you get, the smaller we look - hard choices are easy in the clouds
the hard choices are easy in the clouds - them hard choices are easy in the clouds
i live here on the ground floor - rarely get more than a little high
i breathe beaucoo exhaust n diesel fumes - but i still believe in the man in the sky
sometimes i sleep in graveyards - sometimes i sleep in tents
but whereever i sleep, when i awake - i know i'm not the president
a lady-girl was pushing her stroller that day - tinny music fizzed in her ears
i glimpsed a shadow, heard a safety snick - an angry man pulled a gun on her
he shouted "nobody better fuckin move" - but they scattered n screamed n scrammed
time stood still and jungle heat beat down - and a huey lit up the sky
i heard a huey light up the sky - a good old huey lit the sky
always knew my life was worthless - they took my leg off at the 91st
jeeps slammed their brakes n boots hit the ground - i was caught in a strange sideshow
with beehive rounds rippin through my mind - i stepped towards the crazy man
he had a beretta on the lady, army boot on her stroller and eyes that didn't quite understand
he and i usta be brothers in arms - he was my LT in viet nam
but sometimes your life tastes so sweet an others its a clusterfuck
i saw there waren't no baby in the stroller - just gun oil and jungle sweat
time recommenced as i snapped a salute - n he swung towards me and fired
he swung twards me and fired - on full automatic, he swung and fired
i knew my good momma was right all along - and i's a special child
a bullet ricocheted off my metal plate - deja vu 40 years behind
i tried to catch the young lady-girl but she'd taken a nap right there
LT saved his last bullet for hisself - never much liked that asshole anyway
so i rummaged thru the stroller - helped myself to a nice bottle a wine
rotors were beatin, orders were shouted - and american blood pooled on the road
i thanked the young lady for her sweet sweet grapes - but she didn't hear a word
i found my pack n gave my foot a shove - n pushed my way into the gathering crowd
i pushed my way into the reeds - i pushed my way back back into the reeds
Thanks,
Timbo
i was pushin my shopping cart one day - everybody in a suit but me
they all seemed so tall and i felt so small - that i worried somebody'd step on me
they worked up in the towers - you know the ones that touch the clouds
the higher you get, the smaller we look - hard choices are easy in the clouds
the hard choices are easy in the clouds - them hard choices are easy in the clouds
i live here on the ground floor - rarely get more than a little high
i breathe beaucoo exhaust n diesel fumes - but i still believe in the man in the sky
sometimes i sleep in graveyards - sometimes i sleep in tents
but whereever i sleep, when i awake - i know i'm not the president
a lady-girl was pushing her stroller that day - tinny music fizzed in her ears
i glimpsed a shadow, heard a safety snick - an angry man pulled a gun on her
he shouted "nobody better fuckin move" - but they scattered n screamed n scrammed
time stood still and jungle heat beat down - and a huey lit up the sky
i heard a huey light up the sky - a good old huey lit the sky
always knew my life was worthless - they took my leg off at the 91st
jeeps slammed their brakes n boots hit the ground - i was caught in a strange sideshow
with beehive rounds rippin through my mind - i stepped towards the crazy man
he had a beretta on the lady, army boot on her stroller and eyes that didn't quite understand
he and i usta be brothers in arms - he was my LT in viet nam
but sometimes your life tastes so sweet an others its a clusterfuck
i saw there waren't no baby in the stroller - just gun oil and jungle sweat
time recommenced as i snapped a salute - n he swung towards me and fired
he swung twards me and fired - on full automatic, he swung and fired
i knew my good momma was right all along - and i's a special child
a bullet ricocheted off my metal plate - deja vu 40 years behind
i tried to catch the young lady-girl but she'd taken a nap right there
LT saved his last bullet for hisself - never much liked that asshole anyway
so i rummaged thru the stroller - helped myself to a nice bottle a wine
rotors were beatin, orders were shouted - and american blood pooled on the road
i thanked the young lady for her sweet sweet grapes - but she didn't hear a word
i found my pack n gave my foot a shove - n pushed my way into the gathering crowd
i pushed my way into the reeds - i pushed my way back back into the reeds
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