Star Gladiator

[BillyBenson]

This is just a rap track I put together.
FL Studios 10 for the instruments, mixed everything in Audition CS6.
I'm new to producing, so I'm not sure how mixing beats usually goes, but I tried.
I'm looking for critique and suggestions.


Thank you.

 

[rayc]

"I'm not sure how mixing beats usually goes, but I tried." means you're not "producing".
You are beginning to record and, maybe, mix.
The Casio intro is pretty sad.
The instruments need to be panned across the stereo field so that there's some balance to the sound.
The rap doesn't have a decent hook.
Your breathing needs work as you seem to run out of air and braw it in a few rough spots.
Some of you vocal/lyrical metre dosen't match the music's rythm.
Your voice has some good tone to it but you need to work on the setting for it.