Thank you for all the nice comments. It's good to be in a supportive group like we have here in the Fostex forum. The "big boys" over at the Mixing Clinic is not even looking my way. I guess silence says something.
Being my own worse critic, after listening to the song again this morning, I realize that the vocals sound very lethargic. With the song also being in 3/4, it can easily put one to sleep!
With respect to setup, it's very simple-- it's all Fostex MR-8! There's no external mixing, no eq'ing, no computer software. It's simply a cheap microphone plugged directly into the Fostex with the mic line turned to max (I think I should get a better mic) and my Yahama keyboard in the other plug.
I only used four instruments, so no bouncing was done. Well, except for bouncing to tracks 7/8 for conversion. I find that the quality is not as good once you bounce the tracks and then overdub. Is it me?
Anyway, thanks for the comments. I look forward to hearing some of your recordings as well.
KF