This is a song I wrote today. would anybody listen and give some feedback
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3033&alid=-1
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3033&alid=-1
Song I wrote today
- Thread starter Prizmaxic
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stonepiano
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I like the rhythm guitar. Good chunky beat.
the drum sound is very distant. all I can hear in my shitty earbuds are the hi-hat, the ride and the crash. Very little snare and only a tad more kick.
The vocals are strong and have a good semi-unique character but I didn't notice anything too catchy in the lyrics.
The lyrical hook "in my dreams" is about as cliché as it gets.
The breakdown vocal delay affect does not work for me. If you're gonna break it down, I would do it with some self done harmony vox instead of a the cheezy reverby fx.
Also, interesting you use a fadeout ending. Not often done but I like it. It went out of style in recording during the AM days so dj's could segue easier between songs but, as I said, I like it. Has a nostalgic feel to it.
This is a strong songwriting demo. Good job.
miles
the drum sound is very distant. all I can hear in my shitty earbuds are the hi-hat, the ride and the crash. Very little snare and only a tad more kick.
The vocals are strong and have a good semi-unique character but I didn't notice anything too catchy in the lyrics.
The lyrical hook "in my dreams" is about as cliché as it gets.
The breakdown vocal delay affect does not work for me. If you're gonna break it down, I would do it with some self done harmony vox instead of a the cheezy reverby fx.
Also, interesting you use a fadeout ending. Not often done but I like it. It went out of style in recording during the AM days so dj's could segue easier between songs but, as I said, I like it. Has a nostalgic feel to it.
This is a strong songwriting demo. Good job.
miles