Song I wrote for my girlfriend last night.

[JerryD]

I write music for my girlfriend. I wrote and recorded this last night. I know I need help and would appreciate any you can offer.

 

[Bulls Hit]

I think you should tighten up the start where the drums & guitars come in, take out that misalignment on the 1st hit. I like the warm sound of the rythym guitars. There's a bit of distortion coming from I think the vocal at times, like maybe they were recorded too hot, otherwise the balance seems pretty good