Hey man, cool sounds. Reminds me a bit of Talking Heads. Sounds like "dream" is clipping. Cool bass line. The guitar tone seems to pop out too much in the mix in a way that it's not from the same space. Maybe it could use a little verb? I think the vox might do good from some delay and verb. They sound a bit dry.
Cool song. Sounds like mic jagger when you say "dream" actually.
Haha I really like the interlude parts with the talking.
Yeah, I'm using a $10 mic from Wally World to sing with. Clipmatic 2000.
I ordered some gear from zZ, waiting on it to come in so's I can re-record alot of tunes with more production. Going to start recording on PC; so maybe I can get better use of verb, comp, etc.
I will post before mastering then, for advice & tips. This recent stuff is all ideas/ego posts.